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2016年首批GMAT作文机经分享

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2016-01-06 新通教育

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1. 购买不动产

BENYUEYUANSHI

V1: Sandia DIQUFANGDICHANJIAGEYILUBIAOSHENG,ERPalm GroveDIQUZHEIJINIANJIAGEQUEYIZHIHENWENDING,ZUOZHETUICEsDIQUDEretail spaceJIAGEYEYIDINGHUIGAOYUpDIQU,JIANYIGONGSITOUZIPDIQUDEretail space ,YINGWEIQIBIJIAOof financial interest. (byMENGZAIBINXIFANIYA)

KAOGUYUANTI

The following appeared in a letter from a part-owner of a small retail clothing chain to her business partner:

“Commercial real estate prices have been rising steadily in the Sandida Heights neighborhood for several years, while the prices in the adjacent neighborhood of Palm Grove have remained the same. It seems obvious, then, that a retail space in Sandida Heights must now be much more expensive than a similar space in Palm Grove, which was not the case several years ago. So, it appears that retail spaces in Sandida Heights are now overpriced relative to those in Palm Grove. Therefore, it would be in our financial interest to purchase a retail space in Palm Grove rather than in Sandida Heights.”

参考思路

1. Gratuitous assumption:

(the real estate price in Sadida Heights have been ring while then prices in Palm Grove have remained unchanged in not sufficient to reach the conclusion that a retail space in Sandida Heights is not much more expensive than a similar in Plam Grove )

2. CUOWUYINGUOGUANXI

(more expensive, caused the retail spaces are now overpriced) YEXUYINWEIPCHENGSHIunderpricedNI?

凯时娱乐网址3) Gratuitous assumption:

凯时娱乐网址YINWEIJIAGEDI, SUOYIMAIP CHENG, ZHEIGEYEXUBUSHIGEHAOZHUYI, QITAJINGZHENGDUISHOUYEYOUTONGYANGDEXIANGFA, PCHENGDEJINGZHENGYALIDA。

2. XIAODAOJUBANZUQIUSAI

BENYUEYUANSHI

凯时娱乐网址V1YOUGEHENXIAODEDAOGUODELVYOUBUMENLIECHULEYIGEmemo,TICHULEYIGEJIANYI:DAZHISHIYINWEIJUGAIBUMENDIAOCHA,GAIGUOJINIANQIANJUXINGLEYIGEDAXINGDEZUQIUBISAI,TONGSHIGAIGUODELVYOURENSHUJIAOMEIJUXINGZHIQIANTISHENGLE25%,SUOYIJIUJIANYIGAIGUOJIXUJUBANYIGEDAXINGDETIYUSAISHIHUODONG,SHUOZHEIYANGZUOKEYIYILAIHENJINGJIDEJIGUONEIJINGJIDAILAIHAOCHU,LINGYIFANGMIANKEYIJINYIBUTISHENGYOULVYOURENSHU。(by 493134529)

凯时娱乐网址V2 YIGEGUOJIA5NIANQIANJUBANLEYICHANGmajor soccer competition,RANHOUtouristsXIANGBIYUBISAIQIAN3NIANZENGJIALE25%,RANHOUJIUTIYIJUBANanother international sporting eventsLAICIJILVYOUHEJINGJI。

WODEGONGJIDIAN:

凯时娱乐网址1 KENENGYOUQITADEYINSUZAOCHENGtourism increase other than the competition

2 experience in the pastBUYIDINGSHIYONGYUfuture

3 soccerCHENGGONGBUYIDINGBIEDEsportingNENGCHENGGONG,YINWEIKENENGZHEIGEGUOJIAZUQIUDUIHENNIUBISUOYIYOUKECAILAI

KAOGU

V1. Laura_cheung: JIANGDESHIYIGEB country, five yrs ago, host LEYIGEsoccerTIYUSHENGSHI,JIEGUOtouristsSHULIANGJIZENG25%,DAILAILEJINGJIZENGZHANG。XIANZAIBGUOYOUXIANGYAOFAZHANJINGJIXIYINYOUKE,JIUXIANGZHEZAIKAIYIGEinternational competition,JUEDEYOUKEHAIHUIZAILAI,ZAIHUODECHENGGONG。

V2. By pluiecielZUOWEN:5 years ago, ZHEIGEGUOJIAJUBANLEa soccer event ,ZHIHOUDE3NIANDEtouristsBIZHIQIANSANNIANDUO。WEILETIZHENLVYOUYE,YOULIJINGJI,JIANYIDALIZHENGBANQITAGUOJITIYUSAISHI。

all things equal / causal / false analogy

凯时娱乐网址V3 SHISHUOYIGEXIAODAOWUNIANQIANJUXINGGUOYICHANGZUQIUSAI,ZAIJIEXIALAIDEJINIANLIMIANLVYOURENSHUZENGJIALE 25%, SUO YI arguer RENWEIYAOZAIJUXINGYICHANGSHENGDADE sporting event,ZHEIYIDINGNENGCUJINLVYOUFAZHANERQIEDUIXIAODAODE JINGJIYOUHAOCHU!!!

1. ZUQIUSAIHELVYOURENSHUZENGJIAZHIJIANBUYIDINGYOUYINGUO; 2. LVYOURENSHUZENGJIASHIYINWEIBIEDEYUANYIN; 3. JINIAN QIANDEHEXIANZAIDEQINGKUANGBUYIYANG; 4.JUBAN event DE cost WEIZHI,BUYIDING benefit JINGJI。

V4 B CHENGSHI host events DE argument SHIYIGE office DEGUANYUANXIEJIMAOSILVYOUBUMENDE memo,ZHU YAONEIRONGSHIYINWEI B CHENGSHI(JUEDEHAOXIANGFANYIYINGGAISHIBAXIBA)ZAI 5 NIANQIAN hosted a major soccer competition. RANHOUZAISUIHOUDESANNIANLI the number of tourists increased 25%。SUOYITAMENXIANG GAIBUMENJIANYI,host another sport event LAIXIYINYOUKE,RANHOUJIUNENGGOUTONGGUOXIYINGENGDUODEYOUKELAI TIGAOGAISHIDEJINGJILE。

参考思路

1. SHIDIQUANDENG:WUNIANQIANJUXINGGUOYICIZUQIUSAIJIERJIEXIALAIDEJINIANLIMIANLVYOURENSHUZENGJIA 25%,DANSHIZHEI BINGBUDAIBIAOXIANZAIHAINENGXIYINYOUKE。JULIKEYISHUOQUANQIUJINGJIBUHAO,LVYOUDERENSHUKENENGHUIJIANSHAO,HUOZHEDANGDI ZHIANBUJIA,LVKEFANERJIANSHAOLE。

2. CUOWUYINGUO:BANZUQIUSAIHELVYOURENSHUSHANGSHENGZHEILIANGGESHIJIANMEIYOUBIRANDEYINGUOGUANXI,YOUKENENGLVYOURENSHU SHANGSHENGSHIYINWEIQITAYINSU,LIRUZHEIGEXIAODAOKAIFALEXINDELVYOUXIANGMUCONGERXIYINLEGENGDUOGUKE。

3. WUGUANJIASHE:JUBANSHENGDADE sporting event BINGBUYIDINGNENGDAILAIKEGUANDEJINGJIXIAOYI,JINGUANYOUZHEIGEKE NENGXING,DANSHIRUGUOJUBANHUODONGDE cost HENGAO,ZHUANDEDEQIANWUFA cover HENGAODE cost YETONGYANGBUKEXING。

3. SHOUJIXIYOUJINSHU

BENYUEYUANSHI

YIJIACellphoneGONGSIBIAOSHISHUOZHIZAOcellphoneDEJINSHUYUANLIAOJIAGEHENGAOERQIEBODONGDA。YOUGEforcastSHUOGONGSIDEsalesHUIJIXUZENGJIA,XUYAODALIANGDEJINSHUYUANLIAO,SUOYIGONGSIJUEDINGXIANZAIDALIANGMAIRUJINSHU in lock of savings and guarantee continued high profits. (by JayeL)

KAOGU

V1 cell phoneZHIZAOSHANGZAIZHIZAOCHANPINDESHIHOUHUIYONGHENDUOGUIJINSHUCAILIAO。JINJINIANZHEIXIECAILIAODEJIAGEfall and rise dramatically。YINWEIZHIZAOSHANGDEbusinessYAOJINYIBUFAZHAN,SUOYIHUIXUYAODALIANGDEZHEIXIECAILIAO。ZUOZHEJIANYIXIANZAIDALIANGGOUMAIZHEIXIECAILIAOLAIlock the savings and keep profits。

V2 A cell manufacturerSHUOCellphone production requires some precious metals, such as...The price of these metals increased and decreased dramatically. We forecast that the growth of the sales of the cell phone will continue. Therefore, we plan to buy large quantities of these metals immediately to lock in the costs and guarantee the profits.

V3“cell phone manufacturing requires a large variety of precious and expensive metas, such like gold, silver and copper. ZAIGUOQUDESHUNIANZHONG,WOMENGONGSIYIJINGJINXINGGUODUICILEIGUIZHONGJINSHUDEGOUMAI, and we found the price of these metals sometimes changed dramatically. ERQIEWOMENforcast a growth of our cell phone division and high-volume pruchasing looking strong. RUGUOWOMENGOUMAI(BINGQIEKUCUN?) A large amount fo these metals, JIUKEYIlock our costs. By doing so, we can lock in our cost savings and guarantee a high-level profit.”

凯时娱乐网址V4 YINWEIcell phoneDEYUANCAILIAOJINSHUHENGUI,QIEJINSHUDEJIAGECIQIBIFUdramatically WEILEFANGZHIQIDUISHENMEDEYINGXIANGHEBAOHUCHANPINDESHENGCHANXIAN SUOYIstockholderJUEDINGlock in the cost for those materials(MEIGAODONGlock inYOUSHATEBIEYISI),ZHEIYANGKEYIBAlock in DEsavingsYONGZUOYIHOULAIBAOZHENGCHANYEDEGAOLIRUN(SHOURU)。

凯时娱乐网址V5 YOUGEreportSHUOSHOUJISHENGCHANGUOCHENGXUYAOYIXIEANGGUIDEXIYOUJINSHU,LEISIYUJINYINSHENMADE,CHANGSHANGSHUOGUOQUSHINIANZHONGTAMENDUIJINSHUDEXUQIUYIZHIKUODA,ZAICIGUOCHENGZHONGJIANZHENGLEJINSHUJIAGEDEDAFUDESHANGSHENGYUXIADIE。YOUYUTAMENYUCECIHOUTAMENDUISHOUJIDESHENGCHANRENGHUIKUODADUIJINSHUDEXUQIUJIANGHUIYIZHIHENDA,CHANGSHANGRENWEICISHIMAIXIAXIANZAISHENGCHANXIANSHANGXUYAODElarge quantity of metalsSHIMINGZHIDE,JIANGHUIlockCHENGBEN,BINGQIEguarantee a high profit in the future.

V6SHENGCHANSHOUJIXUYAODALIANGDEJINSHU,BIRUJINYINZHILEIDE,ZAIGUOQUSHINIANZHONGCHANGSHANGDUIZHEIXIEYUANCAILIAODEXUQIUBUDUANZENGJIA,BINGQIEYINCIYINGXIANGDAOZHEIXIEJINSHUDEJIAGEDAFUDUBIANDONG。YOUYUYUCESHUOJINHOUSHOUJIXUQIUJIANGJIXUBUDUANZENGJIABINGQIEDUIYUANCAILIAODEGOUMAIYEJIANGBUDUANZENGJIA,YINCIKEYIKAOLVTONGGUOZAIXIANZAIDALIANGGOUMAIZHEIXIEYUANCAILIAOZUOWEIlock in the costLAIJIEYUECHENGBEN,CONGERZHENGQUGENGDADELIRUN。

参考思路

1. SHIJIANQUANDENG: GUOQUJINIANZHANGJIABUDAIBIAOWEILAIHUIZHANGJIA,RUGUODIEJIAHUIJIGONGCHANGZHAOCHENGSUNSHI

2. CHONGFENBIYAOTIAOJIAN:TIQIANGOURUCAILIAO BINGBUSHI BAOZHENGLIRUNDEWEIYITIAOJIAN。YINWEIJIAGEBODONGKENENGSHANGFUHUOXIAJIANG GAIGUIJINSHUSHIFOUZAIJUEDINGSHOUJICHENGBENZHONGQIZHONGYAOZUOYONG?KENENGYINGXIANGSHENWEI

凯时娱乐网址3. HAIYOUGONGSISUOZUOforecastDEKEKAOXING:TAMENSHIGENJUSHENMEZILIAOLAIZUODE, JUBUJUYOUPUBIANXING?

4. WUGUANJIASHE: TIQIANGOUMAI JIUYIDINGHUI BAOZHENGLIRUN。FUZUOYONG: GUIZHONGJINSHUCUNCHUYUKANHUXUYAOEWAIDELAODONGLIHECANGCHUZIJIN.ZHEIZENGJIALEYINXINGCHENGBEN.

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