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托福写作的八类常见错误分析

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2019-03-12 新通教育

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托福写作常见错误一、单词拼错

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托福写作常见错误二、缺少句子成分

在英语写作中,一般情况下,主语和谓语是句子的主干成分,也是一个句子不可或缺的两种成分,但是有些同学在写长句子时很容易出现句子不完整这种错误。>>>请名师帮忙批改托福写作文章

LIRU:In this era of rapid social and technological change leading to increasing life complexity and psychological displancement,both positive and negetive effects among persons in Western society.

POUXI:ZHEIGEJUZIZHONGSHOUXIANBAOKUOHENZHANGDEYIGEXIUSHICHENGFEN——SHIJIANZHUANGYU "In this era of rapid social and technological change",ERHOUCHUXIANLEZHUYU "both positive and negetive",DANSHIQUELOUDIAOLEWEIYUHEBINYU "call for a balance"。

托福写作常见错误

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托福写作常见错误三、句子结构错误

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凯时娱乐网址LIRU:I was able to raise my TOEFL score by studying hard and I read lots of books.

凯时娱乐网址POUXI:ZAIZHEIJUHUAZHONG,and QIANHOUDOUYINGGAISHIXIANGTONGDEDONGMINGCIDEXINGSHI,SUOYIYINGGAIGAICHENG:by studying hard and reading lots of books.

托福写作常见错误四、不加标点符号

凯时娱乐网址BUJIANDUANJUZI ( Run-on Sentences ) ZHIDEDAODISHISHENMENI ? QINGKANXIAMIANDELIJU。

LIRU:There are many ways we get to know the outside world.

POUXI:ZHEIGEJUZIBAOHANLELIANGCENGWANZHENGDEYISI:"There are many ways。" YIJI "We get to know the outside world." DANJIANDANDIBATAMENLIANZAIYIQIJIUBUTAITUODANGLE。

GAIWEI:There are many ways for us to learn about the outside world.

或:There are many ways through which we can become acquainted with the outside world. >>>对托福写作有疑问?点击咨询

托福写作常见错误五、乱用词汇

CIXINGWUYONG ( Misuse of Parts of Speech ) ZHIDESHIKAOSHENGZAIXIEZUODEGUOCHENGZHONG,BUKAOLVDANCIDECIXINGHECIFAGONGNENG,DANCHUNDICONGCIYIDUIZHAODEJIAODUCHUFALAIYUNYONGDANCI,CONGERZAOCHENGBINGJU。

LIRU:I against these rules because they are not so good.

凯时娱乐网址POUXI:BENJUSHIDIANXINGDECIXINGWUYONG,against SHIYIGEJIECI。XUYAOYU be DONGCIYIQIGOUCHENGWEIYUCHENGFEN。

托福写作注意事项

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托福写作常见错误六、代词意义不明确

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凯时娱乐网址LIRU:Alice and my sister are neighbors, and she always invites her to her house.

POUXI:ZAIZHEIJUHUAZHONG,DUZHEWUFAMINGQUEDIPANDUANZHEILIANGWEIGUNIANGDAODISHISHEIYAOQINGSHEIQUJIALIZUOKE。SUOYIZAIXIEZUOZHONG,WOMENYINGGAIJINLIANGBIMIANRONGYIYINQIWUJIEDEDAICI,JIANGSUOZHIDUIXIANGJIAYIMINGQUE,FANGBIANLIJIE。

改为:Alice and my sister are neighbors, and she always invites my sister to her house. >>>托福写作课程咨询

托福写作常见错误七、句子冗长

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凯时娱乐网址LIRU:Considering the fact that the problem is very complex,the government needs to take more targeted measures.

POUXI:BENJUDE "the fact that the problem is very complex" XITONGWEIYUCONGJU,ANZHAOSHANGSHUDEYUANZE,WOMENKEYIYONGCIZU complexity of problem LAITIHUANZHEIGECONGJU。

托福写作常见错误八、逻辑性差

BULIANGUANZHUYAOZHIDESHILIANGGEJUZIQUEFALUOJISHANGDELIANXI,QIANWENBUDAHOUYU,HUOZHELIANJIECISHIYONGDEBUZHUNQUE。ZHEIYESHIKAOSHENGZUICHANGFANDEYIGECUOWU。SUOYIZAILIANXIXIEZUOSHI,BIXUYAOYOUYISHIDIJIAQIANGJUZIZHIJIANDELUOJI。LIRU:Home-working enables employees to make a better balance between career and family. Working at home can free people from the sudden changes of weather.

凯时娱乐网址POUXI:ZHAYIKAN,ZHEILIANGJUJUZIBIAODAQINGXI,YONGCIZHENGQUE,HAOXIANGMEIYOUSHENMECUOWU,DANQUEHULVELELIANGJUJUZIZHIJIANDELIANXI。LIANGJUHUADOUSHIMIAOSHUZAIJIAGONGZUODEYOUDIAN,WOMENKEYIYONG "what ’ s more"、"in addition" DENGCILAIBIAODAYIZHONGDIJINGUANXI,ZHEIYANGJIUSHIWENZHANGDECENGCIGENGFENGFU。

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